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This paper is divided into two parts .The first part mainly deals with the characters and writing requirements of the College Entrance written English;The second part mainly focuses on the writing materials that have appeared in the past College Entrance examinations,including national and province papers ,and its writing requirements .I hope it will help senior teachers and students do well in it more or less .
2010年高考英语书面表达应试指导(1)
2010年高考英语书面表达应试指导
四川省至诚职业中学 熊运华 636733
Abstract: This paper is divided into two parts .The first part mainly deals with the characters and writing requirements of the College Entrance written English;The second part mainly focuses on the writing materials that have appeared in the past College Entrance examinations,including national and province papers ,and its writing requirements .I hope it will help senior teachers and students do well in it more or less .
Key words : the National Matriculation English ; written English ; examination guidance
摘要：本文分为两个部分：第一部分简要介绍了高考英语书面表达的特点和试题写作要求；第二部分多角度列举了近几年的全国卷和省卷中出现或可能出现的题材及其写作要求。希望能对2010年的高考英语书面表达，无论是教学还是考生应考或多或少有所帮助。
关键词：高考英语；书面表达；应试指导
Introduction(引言)
英语书面表达是高考英语的一个重要题目，要求考生根据所给情景，用英语写一篇100个单词左右的短文。情景包括目的、对象、时间、地点、内容等；提供情景的形式有图画、图表、提纲等。历览近几年的全国卷和省卷并结合本人多年来的高中英语教学实践，拟将高考英语书面表达的各种题材及写法各取几例，愿与大家共分享。
目录：应用文体 介绍活动内容 日记 书信 通知. 记叙文 说明文 描写文类 议论文 开放作文
应用文体
Asking for Leave（请假条）
Dear Ms Ma, I am sorry to tell you that I can't go to school today. Last night my mother had a high fever and a bad cough. Perhaps she has caught flu. I will take my mother to Tiantan Hospital and then look after her at home, so I couldn't go to school today. So I would like to ask for one day's leave. I will be very grateful if you grant my leave.. Yours,
LiLi
敬爱的马老师： 很抱歉我今天不能去上学了。昨天夜里我妈妈发高烧，咳嗽得厉害，她可能得了流感。因为今天我要带妈妈去天坛医院，然后在家照顾她，所以不能去上学了。因此我想跟您请一天假。如果您能准假我会非常感激。 您的学生 李丽
介绍活动内容
关于“祖国在我心中”主题班会的报导
为庆祝党的十六大召开，你班上星期六召开了“祖国在我心中”主题班会，请你用英语对班会作一报导，内容要点如下：
1. 简况：会议开了两个小时，8个同学在会上发了言，会议开得很成功。
2. 发言内容：歌颂祖国，展望祖国的美好未来，表明为祖国好好学习，把祖国建设得更加美好的决心。
3. 收获：进一步了解祖国，加深了对祖国的热爱，同学们受到了极大鼓舞，表示要努力学习，为祖国争光。
注意：
1. 词数100~130；
2. 党的十六大：the 16th National Congress of CPC.
To celebrate the opening of 16th National Congress of CPC， we held a class meeting last Saturday， the main topic of which was “Motherland in My Heart. ”It lasted two hours.
Eight students spoke at the meeting. They sang high praise for our motherland. They spoke of the bright future of our country and expressed their determination of studying hard so as to make our country more beautiful.
Our class meeting was a great success， from which we know more and more about our country. We have deepened our love for our motherland. We have made up our minds to work hard and win honor for our motherland..
日 记
下面六幅图画描述的是小明的一段亲身经历。假定你是小明，请根据图中提示，用英语写一篇日记。
注意：
1. 日记必须包括图画所表现的主要内容，可适当增减细节，使其完整、连贯；
2. 时间：2003年5月4日，星期五；天气：阴；
3. 词数：100－120.
May 4th， 2003 Monday Cloudy
After school I went home for supper. When I got home， I found my mother lying in bed. She was ill. My father was away from home on business. “What shall I do？ ”I thought to myself.
Since Mother was ill， I must take good care of her. So I decided to try cooking by myself. I did the cooking with great difficulty and it got burnt at last.
I had thought Mother would never like it. But I had to ask my mother to have supper. To my joy， Mother praised me for the meal I had cooked. She said， “It tastes delicious. I’m very pleased with it. ”
I know that Mother is encouraging me to do more by myself.
书 信
A
假设你是李华，你的英国笔友Bob将于九月到你所在城市的建新华文学校学中文，来信请你在学校附近为他找一套住房。请根据图画提供的信息，写信介绍住房的情况，并告知住房面积为25平方米，月租500元。
注意：1．词数：100左右： 2．参考词汇：房租?Tent(n.).
I’m very happy to receive your letter, and I’m glad to hear that you will go to China to learn Chinese here. I have already found a flat for you. It is on Fangcao Street, which is not far from Jianxin Chinese School. Bus No.11 can take you there, and it is one stop before the Chinese School. The flat is on the third floor with 3 rooms, one of which is bedroom, the other two are bathroom and kitchen. There are a bed, a sofa, a desk and some chairs in this 25 square-metre small fiat, and the rent is 500 yuan per month. Maybe this flat is not as good as your wish, but I’ll try my best to meet your needs. If it is not suitable enough, write to me and I will look for another better place. Hope you will come here soon! All the best! Yours, Li Hua
. B
最近，你校同学正在参加某英文报组织的一场讨论。讨论的主题是：公园要不要收门票?请你根据下表所提供的信息，给报社写一封信，客观地介绍讨论情况。 60％的同学认为：1．不应该收门票
2公园是公众休闲的地方
3l如收门票，需建大门、围墙，会影响城市形象 40％的同学认为：
1．应收门票，但票价不要太高
2．支付园林工人工资
3．购新花木 注意：1．信的开头已为你写好。 2．词数：100左右。 3．参考词汇：门票---entrance fee Dear Editor． I’m writing to tell you about the discussion we havehad about whether an entrance
fee should be charged for parks．
Dear editor, I’m writing to tell you about the discussion we have had about whether an entrance fee should be charged for parks. 60% of us schoolmates think that an entrance fee do not meet people’s expectations, for a park is considered to be a place where the public can have a good time when they are not busy either at home or at work. If an entrance fee must be paid by the visitors for a park, it will be necessary to build a gate and surrounding walls. In the end a city will take on a bad look. 40% of us schoolmates think that an entrance fee can be accepted, but it must not be too expensive. The money from ticket selling can be used for paying the gardeners in the park and buying some other kinds of flowers and trees. .In my opinion , I think an entrance fee is useful, for it can be used to protect a park. Do we share the same opinion, dear editor? Yours truly, Li Hua
. C
A Letter to the Headmaster(给校长的一封信)
Dear Headmaster, As the minister of students' life in the Student Union, I am writing to you to reflect something about our canteen. To our satisfaction, the canteen supplies us with various kinds of food.This gives us many choices. At the same time the price for the food is low and the food is tasty. And the surroundings for having a meal have been improved. The canteen has become clean. And when we are eating, we can watch TV. But something unsatisfactory exists, too. For example, the quantity of a helping is less than it should be. This is unfair. And in the canteen, the seats are not enough. Some students have to stand while eating. We hope that the school will consider addingmore seats for us. Finally we hope that they can improve the quality of the food and their service. We will be very happy if our advice is taken. Yours respectfully, XXX
尊敬的校长： 作为学生会生活部部长，我给您写信反映食堂的情况。 令我们满意的是，食堂提供很多种类的食物，这给了我们很多选择。同时饭菜价格便宜，味道可口，而且就餐环境也改善了。食堂干净了。我们吃饭时还可以看电视。 但是令人不满意的方面也存在。例如，食物分量不足，这是不公平的。并且食堂的座位不够，一些学生不得不站着吃。我们希望学校会考虑增添些座位。 最后我们希望他们能改进饭菜的质量，改善服务。我们的建议若被采纳，我们会非常高兴。 尊敬您的
XXX
D.
你是李华，申请到一家外资企业工作。对方要求你用英语写一篇短文，介绍自己的基本情况。短文应包括下面所列的全部内容。
姓名：李华； 出生年月：1977 年 2 月； 出生地：辽宁大连； 学 历：1984-1990 年光明小学，1990-1996 年大连市第六中学； 所学主要课程：语文、数学、英语、物理、化学、电脑； 特 长：英语、电脑（去年在全校电脑竞赛中获第一名）； 业余爱好：游泳、滑冰、集邮、流行音乐；
注意：
1. 情况介绍必须采用短文形式；
2. 词数 100 左右。
3. 短文第一句已为你写好。
生词：竞赛 competition
My name is Li Hua.
内容要点
（ 1 ）年龄，含出生年月及地点；
I was born in Dalian， Liaoning Province in February 1997.
（ 2 ）教育及学历：
a. I started school in 1984 when I was seven.
b. I studied in Guangming. Primary School from 1984 to 1990.
c. After that I went to No. 6 Middle School of Dalian and graduated there this summer.
（ 3 ）所学主要课程：
The main subjects I studied at school included Chinese， maths， English， physics， chemistry and computer.
（ 4 ）特长
I like English and computer best and I am very good at them.
（ 5 ）获奖情况
Last year I won first prize in the school computer competition.
（ 6 ）业余爱好
In my spare time I enjoyed listening to popular music and collecting stamps. My favourite sports are swimming in summer and skating in winter.范文
My name is Li Hua. I was born in Dalian， Liaoning Province in February 1997. I started school in 1984 when I was seven. I studied in Guangming Primary School from 1984 to 1990. After that I went to No. 6 Middle School of Dalian and graduated this summer. The main subjects I studied at school included Chinese， maths， English， physics， chemistry and computer. I like English and computer best and I am very good at them. Last year I won first prize in the school competition. In my spare time I enjoy listening to popular music and collecting stamps. My favourite sports are swimming in summer and skating in winter .
通知
一个参观颐和园的口头通知
假如有一批澳大利亚中学生在京旅游，住在北京饭店，请用英语为他们拟一个参观颐和园的口头通知, 内容要点如下:
1．参观时间: 五月四日，星期三
2．颐和园简介: 它是中国最大的保存最完好的皇家园林, 风景优美, 甚是迷人, 有山有水, 有皇家建筑和画廊。
3．活动安排: 上午自由参观, 中午在快餐馆吃午饭, 下午5:30返回宾馆。
4．集合时间: 星期三早上6:10, 汽车6:30开, 行驶45分钟。
5．集合地点: 宾馆大门口。
要求: 不要逐条翻译, 词数100词左右 。
One possible version:
May I have your attention?
We will visit the summer Palace on Wednesday, May 4. The Summer Palace is the largest well-kept royal park in China. In the park there is water and man-piled hills. There are some royal buildings and a gallery, too. I am sure you will be struck by its beautiful scenery. In the morning we will be free to visit the different places of the Palace and then we will have lunch in the fast-food restaurant. We will get back to the hotel at half five. Please gather at the hotel gate at 6:10 on Wednesday morning. The buses will start at 6:30. It will take us about 45 minutes to get there. Please be on time. Thank you.
记叙文
A Volunteer Labor（一次公益活动）
On April 28th, my classmates and I went to the park near my school where we took part in a volunteer labor. We got there at nine o'clock. After divided into three groups, we began to work. Each group had their own tasks. Group one planted trees and watered flowers. Group Two picked up litter left by tourists and cleaned the benches. My group wiped all the equipment in Children's Playground. Each of us worked hard. At about half past eleven, we finished working. Though we were tired,，we were happy. It was a meaningful day for us because we had done a good deed.
五一前夕??4月28日，我和我的同学去学校附近的公园参加了一次公益劳动。 我们九点钟到公园。分成三个小组后，我们就开始干了起来。每个小组有各自的任务：一组种树、浇花；二组捡拾游人丢弃的果皮纸屑；我们组擦拭了儿童游乐场所有的设施。大家干得都很起劲。 大约十一点半，我们结束了劳动。尽管我们都很累，却很高兴。这一天对于我们大家来说都很有意义，因为我们做了一件好事。
说 明 文
The Importance of Water
As we all know, plants and animals need water. So do the people's life and production, life couldn't go on without water. With the rapid development of agriculture and industry, more and more water is needed. Therefore, water is becoming scarce in many places. What's more, a lot of rivers and lakes are beginning polluted by the waste watcr from factories. Fish can't live in them any longer. At the same time, thc waste water does great harm to people's health. In order to make rivers and lakes clean and prevent water from being polluted, we must do something to stop all sorts of pollution.
水的重要性 正如我们所了解的，动植物需要水，人类的生产生活也需要水。没有水便没有生命。 随着工农业的迅速发展，水的需要量越来越大。因此，许多地方缺水。而且，许多河流湖泊被工厂排放的污水所污染，鱼不能生存。同时，废水给人们的健康带来极大的危害。 为了保持河流湖泊清洁，防止水污染，我们必须采取措施，阻止各种污染
The Mid-Autumn Day(中秋节)
he Mid-Autumn Day August 15th in Chinese Lunar Calendar is the Mid-Autumn Day. It is one of the most important traditional festivals in China. On that day people usually go back home to have family reunion. Each family will have the members get together to have a big dinner. The most popular food is moon cakes. They are round and look like the moon. The moon is the brightest this night. People ate the delicious food while they were enjoying a beautiful full moon in their yard. At this time, some old people would like to tell many past events and tell the children a story about thO rabbit. The children really believed that there was a rabbit on the moon. They wanted to go to the moon and have a look one day. What a great festival!
中秋节 农历八月十五日是中秋节，在中国它是最重要的传统节日之一。 在那一天，人们通常回家与家人团聚，一家人聚在一起饱餐一顿。最流行的食品是月饼，它们圆圆的就像月亮。 中秋节晚上的月亮特别地圆。人们都在自家的院子里一边赏月一边吃着可口的月饼。这个时候；一些老人会讲述许多古老的故事，如月亮上的玉兔，孩子们信以为真，他们真想有一天登上月球看个究竟。 中秋是个美好的节日啊!
描写文类
My English Teacher(我的英语老师)
My English Teacher Our English teacher, Mr. Wang, is a strongly built thirty-year-old man, who is often simply dressed. He has been teaching us English ever since he graduated from the English Department, Beijing Normal University in 1993. He devotes all his time and energy to teaching, often working late into the night preparing his lessons. He is capable of making his lessons lively and interesting, and all of us like his lessons. He is very strict with us but he shows us great concern. He offers us help whenever we need it. We all consider him not only as our good teacher but also as our close friend. We all respect and love him.
我的英语老师 我们的英语老师王老师，今年30岁，身体强健，衣着朴素。自从1993年北京师范大学英语系毕业以来，他一直在教我们英语。他把时间和精力都用在教学上，常常备课工作到深夜。他能把自己的课上得生动有趣，我们大家都喜欢。他对我们既非常严格，又极为关心，不管我们什么时候需要帮助，他都主动提供帮助。我们全都认为他不仅是我们的好老师，而且也是我们的好朋友，我们全都爱戴弛。
议 论 文
A
人们大量捕杀动物，请你就这一看法发表自己的看法
As is often read in the newspaper reports, wild life especially the rare species is threatened with extinction. Human beings are making attempts to hunt wild animals for a big profit., which, of course, results in a sharp decrease in the number of animals. So it is high time for us to take quick action to protect them. First of all, it’s quite necessary for every citizen to realize the importance of animal protection. Only by knowing its importance can people develop a sense of responsibility.People will surely take it for granted to have the duty to prevent any killing of wild animals. So a national publicity campaign should be launched, thus giving animals a good living environment. In addition, the government should pass some laws to forbid any hunting of rare animals. We don’t expect anything harmful to wild life to happen again.
If everyone is involved in the protection of wild life, we’re sure man will be a good friend of animals rather than their enemy.
B
私家车越来越多，由此产生好多问题，请就此提提你的建议。
With the development of economics as well as the improving life standard, more and more people possess private cars.
As each coin has two sides, there are also disadvantages in such a trend. First of all, the air and noise pollution is undoubtedly going from bad to worse. The poisonous gas the private cars send out is not only of great harm to the environment around us, but to our human bodies as well, especially to the respiratory systems. Private cars, of their owners most are new drivers, meanwhile, are consequently easy to result in traffic jams or even accidents. You can imagine how worrying the situation can be when you are in a hurry!
Such being the case, some immediate measures must be taken to prevent it in my opinion. For instance, we should pay more attention to the environmental protection to refresh the air, if possible, to reduce the noise level. It is expected that more advanced technology can make it a reality to replace the poisonous gas with one which both saves energy and causes no harm, thus making our daily life more satisfying .
开放作文
A
越来越多的大学生加入打工的队伍
最近几年越来越多的大学生加入打工的队伍，请你结合下表，就这一现象写一篇短文。
现象 1．根据最近调查，约25％的大学生打零工2．在暑假，这一数字将增至72％3．大学生常做的零活有：家教、服务员、售货员等
原因 1．想赚钱支付一部分日益增长的学费2．想经济上独立，买一些自己想买的东西
意义 1．能获取社会经验，拓宽视野2．能给大学生提供一个了解外部世界的机会
注意： 1．词数：100左右。2．参考词汇： 调查survey; 家庭教师tutor; 学费tuition; 经济地economically; 视野outlook
According to a recent survey，about 25 percent of college students have a part-time job．During summer vacation，this figure will increaseto 72 percent．College students are working as tutors，waiters or salesmen．
Why do they want part-time jobs？First，they want to earn money to help cover the increasingly higher college tuition．Second，they hope to be economically independent and buy whatever they want．
By doing part-time jobs，college students can gain some society experience and broaden their outlook．What’s more，part-time jobs can provide them with a valuable chance/opportunity to know the outside world．
B
以图中小女孩为第一人称，写一篇100词左右的短文
]观察下面四幅图，以图中小女孩为第一人称，写一篇100词左右的短文。要求：短文必须包括所有画面的内容，可稍增加细节，使短文通顺连贯。生词：希望工程：The Hope Project零花钱：pocket money
Yesterday, our teacher told us something about the Hope Project in class. It has been set for helping the children in the countryside who can’t afford to go to school. After school, I came home, and I was wondering if I could do something for the project when I caught sight of the money collecting box on the table. Then I made up my mind to send my pocket money which I had saved for nearly one year to the children who want to go to school. I wrote a letter to them and hurried to the post office. Together with the letter, I posted the money and sent my best wishes to them.
